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Post by Deleted on Oct 3, 2013 9:18:28 GMT -5
Player Nickname: N/A Do you want other role players to give you feed back?:[/i] I am always open to ANY form of advice or criticism constructive or otherwise. Good, bad, or ugly lay it on me. Name: Bane Alter Ego: N/A Age: 30 Birthday: N/A Alignment: Chaotic Neutral Height: 6'8 Weight: 350 lbs Hair:Brown Eyes:Brown Physique: Large and powerful. Covered in tight, ropey cords of heavy musculature. Training: Street fighting, self taught six languages, strategy and tactics, escape artistry, self concealment and disguise. Equipment: Venom dispenser attached to back and wrist with shielded medical tubing leading to the base of his skull. DescriptionAppearance: Black mask with white overlay and red eye lenses. Black tank top and black leather leggings and boots. Black multi compartment belt cinched at the front of the waist with a red or black metal buckle Personality: Cunning and beguiling. Angry and uncontrollable when flooded with Venom. Significant relationshipsNemesis: Batman/Batfamily Close friend: Scandal Savage Bane - Villain Audition postAfter years of living behind the hellish walls of Pena Duro Maximum Security facility, Bane had escaped and made his way to Gotham city. In search of the vaunted Batman, he had made it his life's ambition to find and break the Bat. Nothing would stand in the way of his goal. After months of observation and careful planning Bane had set his sights on the legendary Arkham Asylum. Utilizing his skills as the perfect strategist, and along with the help of his three associates, Zombie, Bird and Trogg, Bane was envisioning making life in Gotham a living hell for the Batman and those that dared get in his way of destroying him. It had been a long journey from the island of Santa Prisca but he had made it to Gotham and now it was his time to shine. He felt a yearning deep in his gullet to claim this city as his own. A prized jewel in his crown as king of Gotham's underworld, and he would start by wearing the Batman down bit by bit. After gathering arms and ammunition and setting off a crime spree the likes of which other criminals could only dream of, Bane made ready. A huge booted foot stepped up onto the skid of the helicopter that was hovering nearby and he climbed into the cockpit. His massive, muscled frame barely fit inside the enclosed space and the pilot stared open mouthed. "Get us in the air." His voice was lilting and quiet but deep and peppered with a vaguely latin accent. He sucked in a breath causing his broad chest to swell with the effort and gazed down at the city streets below as they took off into the night sky. His gaze was drawn to the large circular Bat Signal that was coating the clouds above with the unmistakeable statement that The Dark Knight was surely out and about. "Soon, I will break him." Supervillain Plot and Story written for the Roleplay (All other characters can remove this section) It is a requirement that Leading villains create a story that forces the heroes into action. By now you should have seen the "Story Guide" section Breaking the Bat.
Heroes: Batman, Robin, James Gordon, Batfamily. Villains: Joker, Zasz, Abbatoir, Amygdala, Penguin, Riddler, Ventriloquist, Scarecrow, Catwoman, Poison Ivy, Harley Quinn, Mad Hatter, etc.
Plot: Ideally I'd be enamored to play out the events leading up to the Knightfall storyline. IE: The breakout and assault on Arkham and the breakout of inmates from Blackgate. The inmates of both facilities flood the streets of Gotham with crime and chaos and amidst it all Batman has to try and round up all the ne'er do wells. During this point in time Bane systematically takes control of Gotham's underworld by either intimidating or murdering most of his competition or by making alliances with the powerful elite of the underworld like Penguin, Black Mask, etc.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 4, 2013 6:09:23 GMT -5
Player Nickname: N/A Do you want other role players to give you feed back?: I am always open to ANY form of advice or criticism constructive or otherwise. Good, bad, or ugly lay it on me. Name: Bane Alter Ego: N/A Age: 30 Birthday: N/A Alignment: Chaotic Neutral Height: 6'8 Weight: 350 lbs Hair:Brown Eyes:Brown Physique: Large and powerful. Covered in tight, ropey cords of heavy musculature. The player nickname is just what we would call the player when out of character, for example people call me Steph or Bumblebee. If you would like to be called Bane OOC thats fine too, just let us know. A faceclaim, i.e. an actor that you think would be suitable for the part would be nice to have. It could be Tom Hardy, for example, or if there is a different actor you would prefer, thats ok too. Training: Street fighting, self taught six languages, strategy and tactics, escape artistry, self concealment and disguise. Equipment: Venom dispenser attached to back and wrist with shielded medical tubing leading to the base of his skull. DescriptionAppearance: Black mask with white overlay and red eye lenses. Black tank top and black leather leggings and boots. Black multi compartment belt cinched at the front of the waist with a red or black metal buckle Personality: Cunning and beguiling. Angry and uncontrollable when flooded with Venom. Significant relationshipsNemesis: Batman/Batfamily Close friend: Scandal Savage Bane - Villain Some more detail in just about all these sections would be helpful. Give us an idea of what the training involved, how he had to survive in the prison etc. With the description and personality, again a little extra descriptive content would be helpful, here is a chance to tell us how YOU see the character. The relationships section needs a lot of work. This is about how the character can fit with the other characters in the universe, other villains he might work with, Talia for example, what their history might be. Give us a little flavour of the relationship. Audition postAfter years of living behind the hellish walls of Pena Duro Maximum Security facility, Bane had escaped and made his way to Gotham city. In search of the vaunted Batman, he had made it his life's ambition to find and break the Bat. Nothing would stand in the way of his goal. After months of observation and careful planning Bane had set his sights on the legendary Arkham Asylum. Utilizing his skills as the perfect strategist, and along with the help of his three associates, Zombie, Bird and Trogg, Bane was envisioning making life in Gotham a living hell for the Batman and those that dared get in his way of destroying him. It had been a long journey from the island of Santa Prisca but he had made it to Gotham and now it was his time to shine. He felt a yearning deep in his gullet to claim this city as his own. A prized jewel in his crown as king of Gotham's underworld, and he would start by wearing the Batman down bit by bit. After gathering arms and ammunition and setting off a crime spree the likes of which other criminals could only dream of, Bane made ready. A huge booted foot stepped up onto the skid of the helicopter that was hovering nearby and he climbed into the cockpit. His massive, muscled frame barely fit inside the enclosed space and the pilot stared open mouthed. "Get us in the air." His voice was lilting and quiet but deep and peppered with a vaguely latin accent. He sucked in a breath causing his broad chest to swell with the effort and gazed down at the city streets below as they took off into the night sky. His gaze was drawn to the large circular Bat Signal that was coating the clouds above with the unmistakeable statement that The Dark Knight was surely out and about. "Soon, I will break him." Supervillain Plot and Story written for the Roleplay (All other characters can remove this section) It is a requirement that Leading villains create a story that forces the heroes into action. By now you should have seen the "Story Guide" section Breaking the Bat.
Heroes: Batman, Robin, James Gordon, Batfamily. Villains: Joker, Zasz, Abbatoir, Amygdala, Penguin, Riddler, Ventriloquist, Scarecrow, Catwoman, Poison Ivy, Harley Quinn, Mad Hatter, etc.
Plot: Ideally I'd be enamored to play out the events leading up to the Knightfall storyline. IE: The breakout and assault on Arkham and the breakout of inmates from Blackgate. The inmates of both facilities flood the streets of Gotham with crime and chaos and amidst it all Batman has to try and round up all the ne'er do wells. During this point in time Bane systematically takes control of Gotham's underworld by either intimidating or murdering most of his competition or by making alliances with the powerful elite of the underworld like Penguin, Black Mask, etc.
The post is a good introduction, it tells us a little of how he got there, it describes his physical attributes, his voice, it works well. It could do with a little more personality though it reads a little bit like a checklist of things that happened. If you could give us a little more of his personality, a little more detail about what has brought him to this point. That would help. The story, yes that would be a fun one to do and is tentatively in the timeline. An original one would be interesting .. is there anything that comes to mind?
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